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STORY OF AN ETERNAL LATECOMER by ~anyachan:iconanyachan:



I was
       sleepy
          I wanted
to sleep
    and stop

And I dreamed to be
    an        artist
      God  how I
  dreamed of you
seeing you               walking
         and your way to move
and look
    the blue eyes
              your eyes
out of                                     real.


STORY OF AN ETERNAL LATECOMER
I'm always arrived early, if I wasn't in time.
I've always hated who was in late
Expecially if he was me.
Lack of respect.
I hate wasting people's time.
I don't hate who wastes mine, or well, it depends.
It depends if I'm able to accept their limits.

But you.

You condamned me.

Condamned.
'Cause I never believed to someone's else dream as I believed in yours.
Eternal Latecomer
And nineteen years old I never believed to be able to change the world.
Beatryed.
'Cause you gave up.

At twenty years old again you'll fall in your dream,
in me.

A moi. L'histoire d'une de mes folies.
A. Rimbaud
©2009 ~anyachan
:iconanyachan:

Author's Comments

To my eternal Love, Arthur Rimbaud.
I like to think he'd understand everything I write ;)

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:iconultimateoutlaw:
This is a lovely piece i love the shattered kind of format at the beginning that phases into something, still lost, but less so. And the last few lines are brilliant.

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"What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is the breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is the little shadow which runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset." Crowfoot, Blackfoot warrior and orator 1830 - 1890
:iconanyachan:
Thank you so much! :hug: That's really important for me ;)

--
"My deamons will be yours"

“Am I dead?”
“Hear.”
“… My heart?”
“Yes. Even if you’ve tried, you’ve never stopped it.”
:iconchoryunami:
...and I'd like to be again one who understands everything you have to say, but I'll have to find again my nous and stay in my place. I can't know everything. ^^; I should know this, at least. :aww:

...is this just about your eternal Love, or are you telling him about you, in a way that he could understand?

--
-Watashiwa Orochimaru-sama no shinobi desu.- :frail:

-If you have ever thrown a fake shuriken, kunai, or attempted a jutsu, copy and paste this into your signature. - Bonus points if it was a real shuriken.

-My two lovely lonely neurons: :bump:
:icontobiart:
this is truly a masterpiece; truly I love the way you wrote this......I'm sure Rimbaud would like this work ^^

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Art is a bang! "Deidara"...perchè hai perso? com'è successo?! non dovevi permettertelo!!

ma winzippami il floppino sasu!!

"The one who is not afraid of his sword_is not worth hold it" Shuuhei Hisagi
:iconhoshytaka-storm:
I haven't words about this piece...it's so awesome...I can only say a thing....that I LOVE YOU ART!!! and your style..and it's only the second time that I've said this comment to a person...I'll be your fan for the eternity!:hug:

P.S. : FFAAAAAAVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV!!!!

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:iconanyachan:
Both the things you said, I guess.
My eternal Love and his eternal failure, and in fact, my failure..:) Maybe, once, if we'll have time to spend together like this, I'd like to explain you who he is for me...

--
"My deamons will be yours"

“Am I dead?”
“Hear.”
“… My heart?”
“Yes. Even if you’ve tried, you’ve never stopped it.”
:iconanyachan:
Oh, thank you so much my dear! :hug: this is very important for me :) And thanx for the fav ;)

--
"My deamons will be yours"

“Am I dead?”
“Hear.”
“… My heart?”
“Yes. Even if you’ve tried, you’ve never stopped it.”
:iconanyachan:
Thanx... You don't know how these words are important for me, in this moment..Really. Thank you. :hug:

--
"My deamons will be yours"

“Am I dead?”
“Hear.”
“… My heart?”
“Yes. Even if you’ve tried, you’ve never stopped it.”
:iconchoryunami:
Well, I've been waiting for that day for ages, now, so...
I'm sorry if sometimes I say or write unconvenient things because I don't know some details, but you know, if you don't tell me some things, maybe you can understand that it's hard for me to believe you are a failure... God, then what should I do?! ...

--
-Watashiwa Orochimaru-sama no shinobi desu.- :frail:

-If you have ever thrown a fake shuriken, kunai, or attempted a jutsu, copy and paste this into your signature. - Bonus points if it was a real shuriken.

-My two lovely lonely neurons: :bump:

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